Choosing
My Future
Everybody
have a dream and went to be success. Someone wants to be a doctor, police,
nurse, chef, designer, etc. But I want to be an
English teacher.
When I
was kid, I want to be a doctor because a doctor
was friendly and kind. However, my father would
like me to be a teacher. He told me “A teacher is a good occupation and you will
have an
official
holiday” but I didn’t
care. I want to be an English teacher because of my English teacher. She touches me when I
was 12 year old. Her name is Boosaya and she was beautiful, friendly and kind.
She makes me interested in English and she was a good teacher for me. Therefore, I would like to be an English teacher like
her. Now, I studying English major at Nakhon Pathom Rajabhat University. I
think that it isn’t easy to be an English teacher. So,
I will improve my English skill: grammar skill, speaking and listening skills,
and vocabularies skill as a result I will a good
an English teacher.
Above all, it is a
reason of choosing my future. Even though it
isn’t easy, I make it the best.
I think your idea in this story is very nice. That kind of work makes me happy. Good spelling and grammar is an essential in Paragraph Writing.
ตอบลบParagraph 2 lines 8, The word "touches" that it should be taught. Right?
ตอบลบSome sentence, you should use past simple. Your blog is so cute.
I think, you always forget the article and and usually spell the words wrong.
ตอบลบYour blog is good but there are wrong grammar and vocabularies a little bit.
ตอบลบ.Hi! my friend. Your topic is interesting. You wrote it well by yourself. There are some error such as
ตอบลบ- When I was kid
Should be "When I was a kid"
- went to be success.
Should be "want to be success. "
- She touches me when I was 12 year old
Should be "She taught me when I was 12 year old."
- She makes me interested in English.....
Should be "She made me interested in English....."
- I make it the best.
Should be "I make it best."