Loykratong day
Loykratong festival since Sukhothai age and important for Thai people. This day, everybody made a kratong and float a kratong in to the river for apologizing Ganges River. Some place had a kratong contest.
On Loykratong day I get up 06. 30 am. After I
washed the dishes and went to grandmother’s home. I made a kratong for my
family. Frist, I cut a banana plant and banana leaves. It is difficult for me
but I enjoyed. The next, my younger brother and I lead banana leaves exposed to the sun. After, I started to make a kratong for my
mother and my younger brother. When I finished I went my home. I cooked with my
mother and had lunch. 
Some sentence wasn't past because you told the old story. So you should improve it.
ตอบลบThen, you will write more better than now. Your weblog have colorful.
You forgot to put commas many sentences. The topic should be big more than the details and has colour to unlike. I like your writing naturally and many photos.
ตอบลบYour blog is beautiful but I think some words are not clearly and incorrect tense.Please edit it again.
ตอบลบWeblog is so cute and I think some words are incorrect tense because some tense is past and some tense is parsent.
ตอบลบYou should edit out unnecessary words phrases. The sentences too long and easy to read. I think you should edit what you write and use your computer spell-check, but check for grammatical mistakes yourself.
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ตอบลบVery creative! It is written by your experience. The detail is so well. There are some error such as
ตอบลบ- Loykratong festival since Sukhothai age and important for Thai people.
Should be "Loykratong festival has had since Sukhothai age and has been
important for Thai people."
- On Loykratong day I get up 06. 30 am
Should be "On Loykratong day, I get up 06. 30 am"
Check your verb tense again.